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Well, there you go. Not as long as the last, but definitely longer than the first! I've improved a lot artistically, but I don't think I've yet recaptured the dramatic punch of that initial story. This chapter, in particular, had a habit of meandering, as its "theme" - getting to know some older, more experienced characters, to go with finding out about the starmetal key - was quite vague, though hopefully it helped give an impression of the world as being beyond just the main characters. I'll have to see what I can do to improve on my writing.

To add a little extra punch to the chapter end, a fine helping of fanart is available for your pleasure.


Exalted game, characters, setting and concepts are property of White Wolf Publishing,
and the artist makes no claim to them. Keychain of Creation-exclusive characters and artwork,
on the other hand, are property of Padraig O Ruanai except where otherwise noted.
So don’t be stealin’ me stuff, yarr. Contact possible at jukashi@patternspider.net